As well as asking our peers and other members of our target audience, we decided to upload our rough cut onto twitter, therefore uploading it directly to our audience. Here are the results:
@Abi_Godwin: Aww it's really good! I love that shot of the flower where it's in focus and moving in the wind. The shots get kinda repetitive as the video goes on, but apart from that, i love the theme of it!x
@Lil94: It's ok, but when i did this last year, i got told to change the appearance of the main character every now and again, maybe do that too. It did seem to look the same through. But yeah the actual shots where good :) x
@El_101X: I didn't really understand the story. I understood that you weren't sure of your feelings, but then you went to post a random letter out of no where! Maybe you should get rid of that bit
@R_Jones15: The miming was a bit off in some places, but i think you done a good job so far girls :) x
@Jo_72: It's lovely! it's such a sweet little video! The heart made out of leaves was excellent! maybe add some more bits like that?
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