- All the shots were in sync with the music
- Symbolism of the flowers came across as very effective
- We took on advice to use more locations
- Stop motion worked well
- All the shots were in focus
What we need to improve
- Doesn't quite feel like a music video due to repetition of shots (we were already planning to improve this)
- Miming needs to be improved
- More stop motion could be used
- More of a narrative, such as writing the letter before posting it
- Different mise en scene to be used
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