Feedback from our Second Rough Cut

After showing our second rough cut to our peers, they provided us with some feedback. Below is some of the suggestions and comments that were made: 

Positive: 

• Steady shots were used throughout.
• Good use of props 
• Good use of filming techniques (stop motion and close up of flowers) 
• Different shot types and angles we used 
• Varied locations 
• Genre is clear

Improvements: 

• More shot transitions
• Lip syncing needs to be edited at the beginning 
• Some of the settings were a bit random